i think the blue works better. do you have a filter ontop of the whole thing?
i'd change the hand on the left, it's too straight on. also, tangent with the hair and pencil, hair and sleeve. glasses and hair. right side boot and coat.
also, i'd soften the light quality of the bottom of her jacket on the left side. I just notice you used a little trick for the line quality, but i think you should still look out for these things.
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i think the blue works better.
do you have a filter ontop of the whole thing?
i'd change the hand on the left, it's too straight on.
also,
tangent with the hair and pencil, hair and sleeve.
glasses and hair.
right side boot and coat.
also, i'd soften the light quality of the bottom of her jacket on the left side. I just notice you used a little trick for the line quality, but i think you should still look out for these things.
cool character!
Thanks Frank!!
Your comment is really helpful
I need critique from somebody since I don't have any class...hehehe
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