tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6553515562922522118.post8061158242509787096..comments2023-08-27T01:16:09.783-07:00Comments on Maamite: Hatsumeika (Inventor)MAAhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14001469984953545861noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6553515562922522118.post-33010814650712217142008-06-02T10:28:00.000-07:002008-06-02T10:28:00.000-07:00Thanks Frank!!Your comment is really helpfulI need...Thanks Frank!!<BR/><BR/>Your comment is really helpful<BR/>I need critique from somebody since I don't have any class...heheheMAAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14001469984953545861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6553515562922522118.post-49173582696796006992008-05-31T11:51:00.000-07:002008-05-31T11:51:00.000-07:00i think the blue works better.do you have a filter...i think the blue works better.<BR/>do you have a filter ontop of the whole thing?<BR/><BR/>i'd change the hand on the left, it's too straight on.<BR/>also, <BR/>tangent with the hair and pencil, hair and sleeve. <BR/>glasses and hair.<BR/>right side boot and coat.<BR/><BR/>also, i'd soften the light quality of the bottom of her jacket on the left side. I just notice you used a little trick for the line quality, but i think you should still look out for these things.<BR/><BR/>cool character!Frankhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16164483860816206162noreply@blogger.com